Just wanted to add that I find this extremely clever… not only is his eyesight a great justification for having a monochromatic comic, but its a nice metaphor for his worldview (if I’m reading this right).
So I went ahead and looked back at the beginning of the story re-read through it, and this page instantly caught my eye. I just wanted to say that I really liked how you originally drew the light going into the eye. I wish you hadn’t changed it :(
The third panel’s got to be my favorite of this page. It’s just so much fuller that the rest of it, it really catches attention. Plus I’m the type who stares at the little details of a picture for a long time.
Just wanted to add that I find this extremely clever… not only is his eyesight a great justification for having a monochromatic comic, but its a nice metaphor for his worldview (if I’m reading this right).
Ahhhhhhhhhh, so cool, we get to see that his pupils are RED, which you don’t get to see unless you check out DA or the fanart….
Sweet!
At some point, I completely stopped noticing how odd his eyes were. I have to be reminded that they aren’t natural; they’re just HIM.
Ah, I was going back and rereading your comic and I realized how new and sleek some of these panels are….very clever, I love the new look!
So I went ahead and looked back at the beginning of the story re-read through it, and this page instantly caught my eye. I just wanted to say that I really liked how you originally drew the light going into the eye. I wish you hadn’t changed it :(
Ooo, lookit the eyebrow and eyelash details on the second to last panel!
The third panel’s got to be my favorite of this page. It’s just so much fuller that the rest of it, it really catches attention. Plus I’m the type who stares at the little details of a picture for a long time.
dellightfully devilish seymour