That sixth panel should be a cover page, wow! The poses are spot-on and Schtein’s expression is fascinating. And that lip bite in panel five… daaaaang. And, as Senam noted… buttshot.
Looooordy. I think several people have already commented on the magnificence that is the sixth panel, but let me add my praise to the heap. That panel nicely highlights the size difference between Schtein and his skin-head antagonist, and the expressions throughout the page are just spot-on. Bravo!
Super-short summary of all the win contained on this page:
1st panel: LOOOOOOM OF DOOOOOOOOM
2nd panel: Angry schtein is Angry! ( and will have VENGEANCE!!)
3rd panel: Shifty-eyed Drew
4th panel: Dramatic Irony!
5th panel: The face of win that every reader feels at the conclusion of this page
6th panel:
7th panel: I’m firin’ ma TAAZERRR!!
….. This commenter apologizes for any unwanted weird, cheesy, or nerdy feelings upon the reading of this comment. That is all.
In the next panel we see some Phieas-approves chiv action on the helpless drew.
Though I’m quite sure that a normal batteries don’t have enough juice for the paralyzing voltage, not for the whole body, but future technology to the rescue – he must be using some yet to be invented micro fusion cells.
Actually, they can. Tasers have been discovered some time between first and second world war. All you need is a Battery, some kind of electromechanical vibrator to make saw tooth voltage and a transformer – and zap you’ve got yourself high voltage. For this basic taser, all Schtein needs is the battery, some copper wire and some ferromagnetic metal for more efficiency. Nothing special ;)
It’s a common rule of plans: If you see the plan being formulated, it has a much higher chance of being foiled. The mysterious plan that the main character makes without the audience has a much better chance of success, because it would be confusing to have certain elements of the plan never even revealed because it failed.
I really do hope Schtein was making other, more secret preparations, or else this is going to go downhill FAST.
I love your work Ms. Becky! I think it is one of the hardest things in the art world to draw hands and be able to scale, awesome Job! (with a side of Epicness!) But honestly he better have an implant or something to keep this guy in line, and/or kill him.
I really like how the art reflects the inner darkness. He’s enjoying this. Of course he would be. He’s still too soft though. I don’t like that at all… What’s next I wonder? ;)
How is it that I feel bad for the big evil racist? There is something wrong with me.
Oh well, it’s still nice to see Schtein getting his revenge.
The first panel really sets the stage for this page amazingly. It’s so sinister.
I read the first few panels, but when I scrolled down the page, I saw that face and let out a big “Yay!”
Then my cranky cousin told me to quiet down because he’s watching a movie. I:<
I really like how you’ve slowly transitioned Schtein from being a bumbling, scatter-brained kind of jerk to a more inwardly-directed villain. I wasn’t sure how this prison chapter was going to pan out, but it’s been really effective in the transition to the super-villain persona. I can’t wait to see where you go from here!
Ok, something about this page I love. The lighting is perfect for the mood and Schtein looks so freaking scary in the fifth panel. That is a face I would not trust!
At Dredogastus.
Well U C, since making butt-ugly faces was the point of the page, my comment was a strong yet oh so subtle compliment.
Schtein p7 is better than the rest though. Styly even though it’s ratsy and impish in an evil way(in a good way).
I can’t believe I’m actually supporting this kind of unsporting behaviour though. The proper road for a protagonist is: proud suffering, training montage, test of skill, summoning of mayor pain towards enemies, bust the wall with your fist and walk into the sunset.
That’s how we should be teaching kids to behave! For honor and kapoow! noises
Alternative convo:
Schtein: Hey bro, I know you like to beat people up.
Drew: Yeah I like beating people up. You like getting beat up?
Schtein: Sure I like getting beat up… if you like getting TASERED.
One of my favorite things about this comic is watching your art grow; it hasn’t drastically changed in style since the start of this, but it’s definitely a huge improvement. It’s more dynamic and your coloring is absolutely gorgeous.
Oh Schtein’s face in panel 6~ So Very Evil
>Schtein’s face in panel 7
Fixed.
Panel 6 is DAT ASS.
OH MY GOD YES *fistpump*
please don’t get killed schtein, not after you’ve accomplished this awesomeness <:(
I am going to kill of the main character. >:D
Y-you aren’t serious, r-right?D:
Only in Aprils.
What a twist!
If you do I might be forced to write a horribly bad fanfic! You don’t want that!
sweet catharsis.
Shit just got real.
His hair has gotten so fluffy! I wonder how many times he has accidentally shocked himself making that zapper.
he really needs a haircut.
No no no! I like mad scientists with cute hair!
Shit’s goin’ down now. :U
Also, I like Drew’s hands in the panel six. c:
BUTTSHOT! :D
Sorry, I couldn’t resist XD
VENGEANCE!
Though… something gives me the feeling he’s about to get punched in the face when the Drew recovers.
possibly!
That sixth panel should be a cover page, wow! The poses are spot-on and Schtein’s expression is fascinating. And that lip bite in panel five… daaaaang. And, as Senam noted… buttshot.
This page has everything going for it.
Finally, some hot man-on-man tasering.
FINALLY
Looooordy. I think several people have already commented on the magnificence that is the sixth panel, but let me add my praise to the heap. That panel nicely highlights the size difference between Schtein and his skin-head antagonist, and the expressions throughout the page are just spot-on. Bravo!
Drew’s a big guy! Dr. Schtein’s average height, but that MacManus fellow is just hulking out there.
And yet scrawny little Schtein looks far creepier than big hulking skinhead guy. Well done.
Me? I just love the wild swing from the last page of Schtein reminiscing of a marriage gone away to this crazy taser to the throat business.
Looks good on ya, Drew.
No, Schtein! Don’t use non-fatal weaponry on your enemy in a closed environment!
Mayhaps it will be fatal…> : D Shit happens : D
It’s been known to happen. Being shocked is generally not great for the human body.
Maybe he has a pacemaker we don’t know about! =gasp= Shocks wouldn’t be good for that xD
And Schtein built this from scratch. It could well be much more dangerous than a standard taser.
Ah~ i love the fact that his death is likely >}:D
Thanks for that entertaining demonstration on how to seize power, Schtein.
Does this mean you rule the prison now?
Oh and also, thanks for the early update!
P.S!!! (I really hope he has a plan for what happens next…)
sorry for triple posting!
It’s cool.
…maybe he does! Who knows! (he doesn’t seem to be the planning sorta guy, though)
Super-short summary of all the win contained on this page:
1st panel: LOOOOOOM OF DOOOOOOOOM
2nd panel: Angry schtein is Angry! ( and will have VENGEANCE!!)
3rd panel: Shifty-eyed Drew
4th panel: Dramatic Irony!
5th panel: The face of win that every reader feels at the conclusion of this page
6th panel:
7th panel: I’m firin’ ma TAAZERRR!!
….. This commenter apologizes for any unwanted weird, cheesy, or nerdy feelings upon the reading of this comment. That is all.
6th panel: He’s climbin’ in yo cells, creeping yo people out…
Also, in case it wasn’t obvious, epic page Beckey!
I hope he got the volts, amps and hertz right. Now enough shocking power and Drew will just be annoyed by the taser.
I’m sure he did. He’s pretty book smart.
F yeah!
…but it sure is one butt-ugly page
>:\
In the next panel we see some Phieas-approves chiv action on the helpless drew.
Though I’m quite sure that a normal batteries don’t have enough juice for the paralyzing voltage, not for the whole body, but future technology to the rescue – he must be using some yet to be invented micro fusion cells.
Actually, they can. Tasers have been discovered some time between first and second world war. All you need is a Battery, some kind of electromechanical vibrator to make saw tooth voltage and a transformer – and zap you’ve got yourself high voltage. For this basic taser, all Schtein needs is the battery, some copper wire and some ferromagnetic metal for more efficiency. Nothing special ;)
yeah, what he said, tasers only need a couple of double A batteries.
You can make a taser out of a disposable camera!
Well that was very helpful Jansen.
wat
“Actually, doctor, it is my fetish. AND IT FEELS WONDERFUL.”
This :B
Trust me, homemade violet wands NEVER turn out as hot as imagined.
HELLLLL YEAH.
I have been waiting for this page ever since we first got a glimpse of Drew.
It’s a common rule of plans: If you see the plan being formulated, it has a much higher chance of being foiled. The mysterious plan that the main character makes without the audience has a much better chance of success, because it would be confusing to have certain elements of the plan never even revealed because it failed.
I really do hope Schtein was making other, more secret preparations, or else this is going to go downhill FAST.
Revenge is the best medicine!
This can only end in tears.
I love your work Ms. Becky! I think it is one of the hardest things in the art world to draw hands and be able to scale, awesome Job! (with a side of Epicness!) But honestly he better have an implant or something to keep this guy in line, and/or kill him.
Ahhh this is nice. This is very nice. Although, I wonder if he’ll end being shocked so much that his heart stops?
Oh boy! This was so worth the wait!!! Hehe, You’ve been asking for it, Drew!
I love Schtein’s evil face, so joyous.
I really like how the art reflects the inner darkness. He’s enjoying this. Of course he would be. He’s still too soft though. I don’t like that at all… What’s next I wonder? ;)
How is it that I feel bad for the big evil racist? There is something wrong with me.
Oh well, it’s still nice to see Schtein getting his revenge.
The first panel really sets the stage for this page amazingly. It’s so sinister.
Mmm Dat ass :I
Payback! Let ’em have it, Schtein. You need to do some genuine evil.
Don’t tase me bro!
Whoops too late. ;¬)
Oh, tell me this is not a dream….
I read the first few panels, but when I scrolled down the page, I saw that face and let out a big “Yay!”
Then my cranky cousin told me to quiet down because he’s watching a movie. I:<
Awww, don’t worry Drew, tazing is just his way of saying “I love you!” That, and creepy poems.
I really like how you’ve slowly transitioned Schtein from being a bumbling, scatter-brained kind of jerk to a more inwardly-directed villain. I wasn’t sure how this prison chapter was going to pan out, but it’s been really effective in the transition to the super-villain persona. I can’t wait to see where you go from here!
I hope this doesn’t backfire on him… I prefer to see our up-and-coming villain truimphant.
Ok, something about this page I love. The lighting is perfect for the mood and Schtein looks so freaking scary in the fifth panel. That is a face I would not trust!
The TASER. Use the TASER! The TASER! Heheh heheheh heheh.
At Dredogastus.
Well U C, since making butt-ugly faces was the point of the page, my comment was a strong yet oh so subtle compliment.
Schtein p7 is better than the rest though. Styly even though it’s ratsy and impish in an evil way(in a good way).
I can’t believe I’m actually supporting this kind of unsporting behaviour though. The proper road for a protagonist is: proud suffering, training montage, test of skill, summoning of mayor pain towards enemies, bust the wall with your fist and walk into the sunset.
That’s how we should be teaching kids to behave! For honor and kapoow! noises
Sorry p6.
P7 is just classy grade-school grade fun!
Alternative convo:
Schtein: Hey bro, I know you like to beat people up.
Drew: Yeah I like beating people up. You like getting beat up?
Schtein: Sure I like getting beat up… if you like getting TASERED.
I wonder if Schtein has been confusing fabric softener with shampoo…………his head looks like a fluffy little rabbit went to sleep on it
The creepier the expression on Schtein’s face, the more endearing I find him. :’D
But gosh this page. I love it. COMEUPPANCE.
I feel horrific, sinking dread at this page. Nothing good will come of this.
Fantastic comic by the way.
I hope I amused you because I am the creeper who posted on Schtein’s wall 5 times. XD
One of my favorite things about this comic is watching your art grow; it hasn’t drastically changed in style since the start of this, but it’s definitely a huge improvement. It’s more dynamic and your coloring is absolutely gorgeous.
Panels 2, 5 and 6 are just awsome! Love the experssions
I just noticed Schtein is going bald at the temples.
Ooh, I like the voting incentive! :D
:/ That’s a dangerous weapon if it got into Drew’s hands :(