And he never did…
Wow Doc, all Krow wants is to feel validated COME ON.
I can’t tell if I feel bad for Krow. Still. Seems to have been a recurring theme for him though.
OK, I’m thrown by the scenery-change in the first panel BUT I am sure it will become clear.
Delia we love you. Esp. in that last panel. Someone make a sexy Delia costume for Halloween.
that’s like a regular Delia costume, isn’t it? *booed off stage*
Dude, she works in an office now. It’s not like she can wear a cape and spandex.
your drawing has improved so much! That fourth panel is so amazing! C:
Will you tell me I’m pretty!? First three panels are killing me lol.
All Krow ever wanted to be was pretty. :<
You can’t be squeamish if you are going to drive a government issued sedan!
the “Wow. No.” panel literally had me in tears! i am still laughing!
Delia’s face in panel 8 *swoon* As for the scene change, is that little prison scene to tell us where we are in comparison with Doc Schtein’s story, since i’d assume Delia’s story runs parallel to that?
you got it.
Well all the rest of us didn’t. Supposedly Donald Duck-magazines have conditioned us to expect that little yellow “Meanwhile” -box at the upper corner of a panel.
We are so sorry for not being better readers.
Wow, ease up there, dogg. I’m not upset that some people are confused.
For the record it’s SUPPOSED to be a little confusing and disconcerting. It will cease to be so in a couple pages. Okay?
Yes yes, I’m just trying to be funny/insightful.
No anger and definitely not attempt to insult you.
Aw, but we *like* confusing.
Hey there! I got into this comic a few weeks back, but this is the first time I’ve actually commented. I just wanted to tell you what a fine, fine piece of work I think you’re doing. One of the few comics I tend to think about when I’m not reading it. An intriguing story with characters who feel real, and a good balance of humor and drama. Keep up the great work!
aw, man. Gosh. Thank you! C:
I love that crazed look in her eyes on panel 8. great job as usual comrade, keep up the good work.
she’s super jazzed to get the fuck out of that basement.
Even though he’s a horrible monster who has done horrible things Krow is still a human being.
Goddamn it Krow stop it. I’m already sad you’re gone DON’T MAKE ME SADDER.
Whoa…random Krow popping up and making my day just that much brighter. I-I don’t understand WHY he’s there, but…but, you know, I’m not one to question a good thing. Just look at that face!
You are pretty, Krow. You’re very pretty.
It’s showing that while the Doc was in jail getting bomb stuff, Del was at work doing….government sedan……stuff.
I’m thinking we will see this until we get to the point where she’s on TV and Doc sees her. Which blows my idea of the ‘glue like substance’ being the other guy out of the water….but I’m okay with that.
Panel 8 made me thing that Delia was imagining that kinky times were on offer, while panel 9 seemed tinged with vague dissapointment :)
I dunno, Cain’s pretty old…
oh wait oh god that is her thing, oh no no no no.
Oh yes, yes, yes. HEAR THAT, EVERYONE? WE HAVE SHIPPING!
Oh god no. kill it with fire D:
“I dunno, Cain’s pretty old…
oh wait oh god that is her thing, oh no no no no.”
Wow, I love this. Although…I mean, I get what’s going on with the first three panels, but it was actually pretty difficult to grasp. I wouldn’t say this unless I really really thought so, but I think you should edit it. It’s hilarious, though!
nah. There’s no need. It’ll be way more clear in a couple pages.
Ok! I trust you, man.
Have faith, Banta. We’ve not been let down yet.
I like Cain. So….what’s ‘wrong’ with him? X3
he’s just a cool dude with a cool ‘stach
Your comi is always more incredible…nah, actually “comic” or “webcomic” are both reductive, “graphic novel” is just damn right. I guess the first three panels are telling us at which point of the timeline of Chapter Three we are, right now…
I must ask what is wrong with the terms comic or webcomic. Makes it seem like comics are somehow problematic…
The plot, she thickens. Soon, we shall have a lovely roux.
Love Krow’s face in the first panel. Not in a creepy way, just in a “I don’t want to stop looking at that expression, ever” kind of way.
Suddenly wondering if Krow attacked those women to try and prove his own sexuality…
Beautiful job though <3
Wait, what`I don’t get the first row of panels (panel 1-3). Isn’t Krow dead? I remember the Warden shooting him in the head. Are Krow and Schtein still in prison in those panels?
Is this supposed to show that Delia’s current story arc (working with the psychic) is set in the past? That sudden switch back and forth between two storylines without any explanation is confusing. A small label box reading “Meanwhile at the same time in a prison in Nevada” would have helped. Or just advance Delia’s storyline time to the point where she hears about the explosion in the prison in the TV news.
Those three panels with Schtein didn’t really give any new information and didn’t IMO fit into the rest of the page. Retroactive character development between Schtein and Krow seems pointless when we already know Krow is dead.
OH MAN these are chronological. The scene where osgood was on the TV is about to show up. Osgood’s story is actually taking a STEP back in the story. Hence the first three panels. to remind you about Doc and Krow planning stuff and then Stein sees osgood on TV. No we will see what osgood was talking about at the scene of the crime, from her perspective.
Squeamish? He’s talking to a gal who no doubt witnessed many a Guinea pig explosion.
The Schtein/Krow panels at the top of the page really threw me off, as well, and I had some trouble processing what was going on in this page as a whole. But I’m happy to withhold judgement for a couple more pages and see if it really does make more sense and flow together better with a little more context! :D
so, ive lurked on this comic for a while, and i don’t remember ever commenting.
and this comment really doesn’t have to do much with this comic, but is this guy
the same person as this guy?
who may actually be the same as this guy?
none of those guys are the same guy. :D
The flow of this page is, uh, weird. Those first three panels are a total “wait, what?” moment. Could make sense later. Really does not make sense right now. I guess you’re matching up the times when Schtein sees Osgood on TV but it doesn’t really come across that way.
Yay for perspective on panel 4! Nicely done! I like Osgood’s face.
Love Dal’s expression in the 8th panel. she looks phyco.
aw Krow you’re the prettiest princess at the ball^^
Nice to see the Krowster, and waiting for JayJay! Yayyyy
I feel like I’m the only person who wasn’t thrown off by the first three panels…
I wasn’t too thrown off, but I think something to have it stand out as ‘not a part of the current Delia plot’ would be good; maybe fading the colours, or making the gutters around the top panels black (which may or may not work, because the previous page has black gutters).
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